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假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游,来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信,简单介绍以下内容:

1.简况:长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺;

2.位置:天安门广场南面;

3.交通:公共汽车17、69、59路等,地铁2号线;

4.特色:步行街、铛铛车、茶馆、剧院等。

参考词汇:步行街 pedestrian street

铛铛车 trolley car 地铁 subway

注意:1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Dear Sarah,

Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.

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Yours,

Li Hua

答案解析

【答案】

Dear Sarah,

Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.

Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this over 800­meter street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is just to the south of Tian'anmen Square, it's very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No. 17,69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to theaters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. I'm sure you'll like it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

一、写作要点

1.显性要点:感谢来信询问改建后前门大街的情况,现予以回复——前门大街的简况(长度、历史、商铺)——前门大街位置(天安门广场南面)——前门大街交通(公共汽车和地铁)——前门大街特色(步行街、铛铛车、茶馆、剧院等)。

2.隐性要点:交通便利(就在天安门广场南面,有公共汽车和地铁)——品味特色(坐铛铛车去茶馆、剧院体验中国人的生活)——希望对方能够喜欢(点名介绍用意)。

二、要点串并

把梳理出的要点进行串并,将零碎的事实巧妙整合。

◆前门大街简况串并思路如下:具有600多年历史的前门大街长800余米,沿街林立300余家店铺。

◆前门大街位置与交通串并思路如下:前门大街位于天安门广场南面,乘坐公共汽车17、69、59路等,地铁2号线均可到达。

◆前门大街特色串并思路如下:前门大街虽是步行街,但可乘坐铛铛车去茶馆和剧院。

三、组句成篇

1.当要点之间存在主次关系,但又不能将次要点省略时,便可尝试使用从句以突出主句。

范例:As the street is just to the south of Tian'anmen Square, it's very convenient to get there by bus.

2.当要点之间存在并列关系时,可以使用并列连词,使句与句之间结构更紧凑。

范例:Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to theaters and teahouses...

所属考点

景点介绍类文章的写作

景点介绍类文章的写作知识点包括景点介绍类文章写作简介、写作注意事项等部分,有关景点介绍类文章的写作的详情如下:景点介绍类文章写作简介景点介绍主要是对景点周围的环境、场面及自然现象的描述。通过对景点的描写来表达作者的看法或态度,以及环境对人物的影响等。写作注意事项1.把景点和周围的环境及景点的历史意义等结合起来。2.描写景观时按照从整体概述到细节刻画的方法,灵活使用定点描写

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