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Young or old, rich or poor, we all have our own role model. So do I. My role model is Mr. Cui.
He is hard-working for his aims. Once he took part in a speech competition, and every morning we always saw him practicing on the playground. As a result, he got the first prize. What's more, he is a strict teacher, for he always warns us to obey school rules. However, he is a humorous teacher, since he sometimes tells jokes to make his class interesting.
At the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and say I learn a lot from him. For example, I need to work hard to improve my English.
1. Mrs.Xie is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
2.That is the reason why I trust him all the time.
3. Thanks to his help and encouragement，I finally had good grades in physics exams.
4. Nothing is more important than to be honest.
5. She is warm-hearted so that everyone loves her.
6. Her success proves where there is a will, there is a way.
1. 注意hard-working 需要example.
2. 注意linking words.
4. 注意spelling.
5. 注意grammar.
3. 使用 good expression.
依据评价标准，将自己的文章改写成一篇结构清晰，逻辑合理介绍榜样的文章。
1. Proper traits;
2. Examples to support;
3. Linking words for logics;
4. Any good expressions?
5. Any spelling mistakes?
6. Any grammar mistakes?
Self-assessment
1. I'm more familiar with the vocabulary about trait in this unit.
2. I understand what a role model should be.
3. I can analyze (分析) the example compositions and work out the evaluation criterion.
4. I can analyze my composition with the criterion and polish it.
5. I can help partners evaluate his /her composition and give advice.
6. I can correct some mistakes with the help of the partner’s advice.
书面表达：
再与另外一名同学交换检查作文，做修改后，通过“批改网”改掉词汇和语法错误，上传到微信群,并将文章抄写在作文本上。