重庆大学2003课标版《Writing》新课标PPT课件优质课下载

重庆大学2003课标版《Writing》新课标PPT课件优质课下载

Ms Jenkins

So I want to have some of you as my assistants help me polish the letters before I deal with it.

Polish the letters and learn some skills of a good writing

Finish a letter for help by yourself by using the skills

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To be an assistant of Ms Jenkins

WINTER

Template

(满分25分)假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历( resume)。给外教 Ms Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

1).Below are the requirements of the letters. Please read it carefully and make sure which kind of letter it is before you read some letters from Ms Jenkins’ students.

Task 1

Tips to comment on the letter

Are there some sentences need improving?

Is there any unnecessary information?

Is the structure of the passage clear?

Are there any grammar mistakes?

If you were Ms. Jenkins, do you want to help Li Hua after reading the letter?

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I’m Li Hua. I will have a two-month summer holiday. During this time, I will finish my homework first as I am asked and after that, I will still have some time left. So I want to find a part-time job to broaden my horizons. I have just completed my application and

resume. But I am not confident in my English, so I desire your help very much. Can you read my application and resume carefully and correct them if there are any mistakes? I’d be very grateful if you could help me. Thank you for your kindness.

Yours,

Li Hua