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Lead in
What should we do today?
*Work with your group members to mark one of the compositions in a group.
1. Have a clear mind about the criteria(标准） to mark a composition, and then mark the compostion step by step according to the criteria.
2. Give a total score to the compositon based on the full score of 18.
*Better your composition and make it worth a high score.
(If we have time, we will do this in class. If not, do it as your homework)
What are the things you have to pay attention to when you mark a composition?
Check the handwriting (4)
Check the layout(结构布局）and the beginning and the ending(3)
Check the grammar(4)
Check the words and sentence patterns(5)
Check the logic (2)
Criteria（评价标准）
18
Let's see how important the handwriting could be!
Handwriting
这篇作文看起来让人完全没有好心情，只得了6分。
后来仔细看这篇作文，其实写得蛮好的。但当时只给了9分。
因为太多的黑团，这篇作文只得了6分。
Have you realized that our earth is crying because of her dirty sky and smelly water? We don’t have enough trees, water, oil or clean air for our future. People will surely disappear as all the things are gone. Although students can't change the serious situation completely, there are still some things for us to do to save the earth. We can start by doing the 3 Rs: Reduce, Reuse and Recycle.
First ,reduce. Reduce is using less. For example, if you go to a restaurant , order what you can eat. Second, reuse. Reusing is using again. The clothes and the toys can be given away to others' babies if your child has grown older. You don't have to buy trendy clothes because it is just a waste of money. Third, recycle. Recycling is making new things from the old things. There are lots of things which can be recycled in our daily life., such as paper, cans, and plastic bags. So it is necessary for us to sort the garbage out.
If we follow the 3Rs, we’ll save more natural resources. Dear friends, let’s take action to do it from little things! Only when we make great efforts to save our earth, will we probably enjoy a wonderful life.
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Have you realized that our earth is crying because of her dirty sky and smelly water? We don’t have enough trees, water, oil or clean air for our future. People will surely disappear as all the things are gone.
Although students can't change the serious situation completely , there are still some ways for us to do to save the earth. We can start by doing the 3 Rs: Reduce, Reuse and Recycle.
First ,reduce. Reduce is using less. For example, if you go to a restaurant , order what you can eat.
Second, reuse. Reusing is using again. The clothes and the toys can be given away to others' babies if your child has grown older. You don't have to buy trendy clothes because it is just a waste of money.
Third, recycle. Recycling is making new things from the old things. There are lots of things which can be recycled in our daily life., such as paper, cans, and plastic bags. So it is necessary for us to sort the garbage out.