八年级下册《Project： Enter a competition to publish an English newspaper》名师优质课ppt课件

八年级下册《Project： Enter a competition to publish an English newspaper》名师优质课ppt课件

Miss Helena has black hair, her bang covers her eyes, we will never see the light in her eyes. She is dressed in black the silver ring on her index finger is incompatible. Miss Helena carries the bag which doesn’t fit her tiny body and goes back to her pavilion , that is the only thing that can make her breathe.

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“A run-on sentence is a sentence in which two or more independent clauses ( i.e. complete sentences) are joined without appropriate punctuation or conjunction.” (From Wikipedia )

“A run-on sentence occurs when two or more complete sentences are incorrectly joined. In other words, the sentence runs on without stopping.” ( From The Canadian Writer’s World)

Two Types of Run-on Sentences

2. A comma splice uses a comma incorrectly to connect two complete ideas.

Incorrect: Miss Helena has black hair, her bang covers her eyes, we will never see the light in her eyes.

1. A fused sentence has no punctuation to mark the break between ideas.

Incorrect: She is dressed in black the silver ring on her index finger is incompatible.

融合句

逗号拼凑句

Quick response:

Fused Sentence or Comma Splice?

One of the most recognizable modern structures is the Eiffel Tower, it was built at the end of the nineteenth century.

2. In order to celebrate the centennial anniversary of the French Revolution the government held a competition it invited architects to submit designs to commemorate the anniversary of the revolution.

3. Many architects submitted designs, Gustave Eiffel’s tower design won.

4. The tower took twenty-six months to complete it was the tallest structure in the world at that time.

5. Many Parisians did not like the look of the tower, they wanted to destroy it.

6. It was 320 meters tall and it weighed 63,500 tons.

6. It was 320 meters tall and it weighed 63,500 tons.

5. Many Parisians did not like the look of the tower, they wanted to destroy it. ( Comma Splice)

4. The tower took twenty-six months to complete it was the tallest structure in the world at that time. (Fused Sentence )

3. Many architects submitted designs, Gustave Eiffel’s tower design won. ( Comma Splice)

2. In order to celebrate the centennial anniversary of the French Revolution the government held a competition it invited architects to submit designs to commemorate the anniversary of the revolution. (Fused Sentence )

One of the most recognizable modern structures is the Eiffel Tower, it was built at the end of the nineteenth century. ( Comma Splice)