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Both my teachers and classmates think I am able to sing well because I have a gift for singing.
I began to learn my first song ‘Twinkle, twinkle, little star’ when I was six years old. At that time, I found that singing was such an interesting thing. Up to now, I have learnt over two hundred songs.
In my spare time, I often sing songs to others. Everyone is happy to be my listener because of my passion and confidence. Even though I can not be a professional singer, I still get a lot of fun from singing. Because of singing, my life becomes more colourful.
一查：作品完成度
Let’s check if the writer finishes the writing task.
Does the writer manage to tell readers:
● what art form he likes best?
● whether he is good at this art form?
● when he became interested in this art form?
● whether he has any stories about this art form?
● how important this art from is to him?
—— Adapted from the questionnaire in the text book
Characteristics of good writing
good
Fine
Good
Enough
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organization
language
content
Both my teachers and classmates think I am able to sing well because I have a gift for singing.
I began to learn my first song ‘Twinkle, twinkle, little star’ when I was six years old. At that time, I found that singing was such an interesting thing. Up to now, I have learnt over two hundred songs.
In my spare time, I often sing songs to others. Everyone is happy to be my listener because of my passion and confidence. Even though I can not be a professional singer, I still get a lot of fun from singing. Because of singing, my life becomes more colourful.
二评：作品成熟度
Let’s review if the piece is finished well enough.
结构： 1. 文章段落是否清晰易读？ 2 分
2. 文章开头是否吸引读者？ 1 分
3. 文章结尾是否有所感悟？ 1 分
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