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2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【高考年报】改卷场关于写作内容的反馈：
好的方面：
内容上，表达信息完整、准确且充实，要点基本覆盖到位，重要信息把握相对好，能处理好内容的主次重点，细节展开丰富。
存在问题：
没有理解好写作内容，中等偏下的同学无话可说；内容拓展不好，有些拓展不多，不能突出主题。
Reading & Discussion
Read letters A & B.
Discuss with your partners:
Which is better in content? Why?
A
B
Dear Tommy,
I am Li Hua, the person in charge of the Martial Arts Club of our school. I’m writing to invite you to join our club since I learn that you have a keen interest in Chinese culture.
Martial art is an important part of Chinese culture, and our club is the place where you can have a better understanding of it. You can have a healthy lifestyle by learning martial arts and will make more friends in our club.
We have professional coaches to give us training every Wednesday in the Student Center. The training lasts two hours from 4 p.m. to 6 p.m. Besides, there’s a martial arts competition at the end of each school term, which is a special event everybody looks forward to!
Hopefully you can take the chance and sign up immediately.
Yours,
Li Hua
the result of learning martial arts
the result of holding a competition
Why
Why
result
result