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How to write a vivid story with emotions
One sunny Monday, I _______________ on a dirt track near my house.
went for a walk
When I looked at my ring , I ______________________________.
found the diamond in my ring was missing
As I scanned the ground, I _________________
and he promised to ______________________.
met an old gentleman
keep an eye for it
A few days later, the old gentleman ______________ and returned the diamond to me.
knocked at my door
Thanks to the man, I will always remember ___________________________
there are kind and generous people around us.
The lost diamond
One sunny Monday,I went for a walk on a path near my house. But when I looked at my ring, I found the diamond on the ring missing. As I scanned the ground, I met an old gentleman and asked him to help find the diamond.
A few days later, the old gentleman knocked at my door and returned the diamond to me.
Thanks to the man, I will always remember there are still kind and generous people around us.
Is it a moving/vivid story?
How?
make the story vivid by adding feelings to the events
feeling as sunny as the day
unfortunately
Panicked
looking hurriedly for
how hopeless