模块一 Module I Teenage experiences《Self-assessment》集体备课PPT课件优质课下载

模块一 Module I Teenage experiences《Self-assessment》集体备课PPT课件优质课下载

Common problems we may come across:

Use the first and second person instead of the third person没有使用第三人称

Use too many original words or sentences from the passage 直接或过多引用原文

Express opinions too early过早表达观点

Use too many specific details instead of general words 过多细节而非概括性语言

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇30词

左右的summary。

A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice; and he spent most of his days complaining about it.

“It is true that you cannot sing;” said the fox, “but look how beautiful you are!”

“Oh, but what good is all this beauty;” cried

the bird, “with such an unpleasant voice!”

“Listen,” said the fox, “each one owns something good: You have such beauty; the nightingale（夜莺） has his song; and the owl（猫头鹰） has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why can’t you just be happy about what you have already got?”

Use too many specific details instead of general words

Use the first and second person instead of the third person

Use too many original words or sentences from the passage

Express opinions too early

Use too many specific details instead of general words

Use the first and second person instead of the third person

Use too many original words or sentences from the passage

Express opinions too early

Use too many specific details instead of general words

Use the first and second person instead of the third person

Use too many original words or sentences from the passage

Express opinions too early

Use too many specific details instead of general words