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描述性写作：景点介绍知识点包括题目示例、构思谋篇、关键词语、连词成句、连句成篇、亮点点评等部分，有关描述性写作：景点介绍的详情如下： 题目示例【题目要求】 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友 Linda 今年暑假要来你所在的城市杭州旅游。请根据以下提示，给她写一封电子邮件，介绍一下杭州的基本情况。 1．杭州位于中国的东南部，面临东海，因美丽且历史悠久的西湖闻名于世； 2．无论你什么时候来这座现代化的城市，都会看到很多公园和名胜古迹环绕着西湖； 3．节假日或周末人们喜欢在西湖上划船，在树林里漫步，或者坐在草坪上野餐； 4．近些年来，杭州发生了很大变化。许多高楼大厦拔地而起，使杭州呈现出了新面貌。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．电子邮件的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：草坪lawn Dear Linda， I am very glad to know that you will come to my city—Hangzhou this summer vacation. Now I'm writing to tell you something about it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 构思谋篇
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连词成句1．杭州位于中国的东南部，面临东海。 Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China and faces the East China Sea. 2．它以美丽且历史悠久的西湖闻名。 It is famous for the beautiful West Lake which has a long history. 3．在过去的几年里，杭州发生了很大变化。 Great changes have taken place in Hangzhou during the past few years. 4．杭州呈现出了新面貌，每年都有大量来自国内外的游客到此旅游。 Hangzhou has taken on a new look and lots of tourists from home and abroad come to visit it every year. 连句成篇Dear_Linda， I_am_very_glad_to_know_that_you_will_come_to_my_city—Hangzhou_this_summer_vacation._Now_I'm_writing_to_tell_you_something_about_it. Hangzhou ①lies in the southeast of China and faces the East China Sea. It ②is famous for the beautiful West Lake ③which has a long history. ④Whenever you come to this modern city, you will see many parks and places of interest around the West Lake. During holidays or on weekends, people like going boating on the lake, walking in the woods or sitting on the lawn to have a picnic. Great changes have ⑤taken place in Hangzhou during the past few years, ⑥with plenty of tall buildings built. Hangzhou has ⑦taken on a new look and lots of tourists ⑧from home and abroad come to visit it every year. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours， Li_Hua 亮点点评亮点一：本文是一封向笔友介绍旅游景点的电子邮件。首先交代写电子邮件的目的，然后从不同方面介绍杭州，最后表达希望，内容完整，层次清晰。 亮点二：文中运用了很多高级的句式结构，③是 which引导的定语从句；④是 Whenever 引导的让步状语从句；⑥是 with 的复合结构。这些复杂句式的运用体现了作者有很强的写作功底。 亮点三：文中还运用了一些高级词汇，如①lie in；②be famous for；⑤take place；⑦take on a new look；⑧from home and abroad等，体现了作者对词汇有很好的运用能力。 |
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