应用文写作：求助信 |
||||||||||
| 知识点详情 | ||||||||||
应用文写作：求助信知识点包括题目示例、构思谋篇、关键词语、连词成句、连句成篇、亮点点评等部分，有关应用文写作：求助信的详情如下： 应用文写作：求助信【题目要求】 假如你是某中学高一学生李华，长期以来与母亲关系紧张。请根据下表中的信息，给某英文杂志的编辑Mr Smith 写一封信，请他帮你解决问题。
注意：1.词数80左右； 2．信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr Smith， I'm a Senior 1 student and I'm writing to___________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 构思谋篇
关键词语
连词成句1．我写信是就一个困扰我很久的问题征求您的意见。 I'm writing to ask you for some advice on a problem which has troubled me for a long time. 2．她工作太忙，以至于几乎没有时间跟我说话。 She is so busy with her work that she has little time to talk to me. 3．我有点儿怕她，因为她对我要求严格并且容易生气。 I feel a little afraid of her because she is strict with me and gets angry easily. 4．我不知道怎样与她交流。 I don't know how to communicate with her. 连句成篇Dear_Mr_Smith， I'm_a_Senior_1_student_and_I'm_writing_to ask you for some advice on a problem ① which has troubled me for a long time. It is about the relationship between my mother and me. My mother is a university professor, ②who works very hard. She ③is so busy with her work that she has little time to talk to me. I love her and I ④do well in my studies，⑤ but I still feel a little afraid of her because she ⑥is strict with me and gets angry easily. I don't know ⑦how to ⑧communicate with her. I do hope ⑨we can understand each other better and be closer. What should I do? I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li_Hua 亮点点评亮点一：本文是一封关于如何处理母子关系的求助信。作者先分别讲了母亲和自己的情况，然后提出自己的问题和希望。内容完整，语言流畅，逻辑性强，完全符合写作要求。 亮点二：文中多处使用了较复杂的句式结构，表明作者具有较高的写作水平。例如，①为which 引导的定语从句；②为who 引导的非限制性定语从句；③为“so...that...”这个经典句型；⑤为but 连接的表转折关系的并列句；⑦为“疑问词＋to do”结构作宾语；⑨为省略that 的宾语从句等。 亮点三：对一些短语的精确运用是本文的另一大亮点，如③be busy with, ④do well in，⑥be strict with和⑧communicate with 等。 |
||||||||||
