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应用文写作:求助信

【题目要求】

假如你是某中学高一学生李华,长期以来与母亲关系紧张。请根据下表中的信息,给某英文杂志的编辑Mr Smith 写一封信,请他帮你解决问题。

 

注意:1.词数80左右;

2.信的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Mr Smith,

I'm a Senior 1 student and I'm writing to___________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

构思谋篇

关键词语

向某人征求建议

ask sb. for advice

忙于某事

be busy with sth.

在……方面做得好

do well in...

对某人要求严格

be strict with sb.

与某人交流

communicate with sb.

连词成句

1.我写信是就一个困扰我很久的问题征求您的意见。

I'm writing to ask you for some advice on a problem which has troubled me for a long time.

2.她工作太忙,以至于几乎没有时间跟我说话。

She is so busy with her work that she has little time to talk to me.

3.我有点儿怕她,因为她对我要求严格并且容易生气。

I feel a little afraid of her because she is strict with me and gets angry easily.

4.我不知道怎样与她交流。

I don't know how to communicate with her.

连句成篇

Dear_Mr_Smith,

I'm_a_Senior_1_student_and_I'm_writing_to ask you for some

advice on a problem  which has troubled me for a long time. It is about the relationship between my mother and me. My mother is a university professor, who works very hard. She is so busy with her work that she has little time to talk to me. I love her and I do well in my studies, but I still feel a little afraid of her because she is strict with me and gets angry easily. I don't know how to communicate with her. I do hope we can understand each other better and be closer. What should I do?

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li_Hua

亮点点评

亮点一:本文是一封关于如何处理母子关系的求助信。作者先分别讲了母亲和自己的情况,然后提出自己的问题和希望。内容完整,语言流畅,逻辑性强,完全符合写作要求。

亮点二:文中多处使用了较复杂的句式结构,表明作者具有较高的写作水平。例如,①为which 引导的定语从句;②为who 引导的非限制性定语从句;③为“so...that...”这个经典句型;⑤为but 连接的表转折关系的并列句;⑦为“疑问词+to do”结构作宾语;⑨为省略that 的宾语从句等。

亮点三:对一些短语的精确运用是本文的另一大亮点,如③be busy with, ④do well in,⑥be strict with和⑧communicate with 等。

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